The Super hero
As a student do you ever realize how much your teacher does for you? The teachers are the foundation to your successful career.
There once was a student who was really struggling with his studies. He had had low self-esteem, lack of confidence and thought he was not capable of doing anything. He got into the influence of an ideal teacher who encouraged him to stay positive and work hard towards your studies. The teacher also said"Recognize your hidden qualities and they will guide the path to your career."
The student took upon the advice and today is a successful author and wrote a book about his teacher as,"The Super Hero."
In the second sentence you do not need the word key, after "there" you should write "once", and capitalize the word "recognize". Otherwise great story! Good Luck!!:)
ReplyDeleteAmazing story but you have a comma and a quotation front of recognize.
ReplyDeleteGreat story and I couldn't find any corrections
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